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Herewego

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Hello.
Would anybody correct my mistakes in this email?

Dear student enquiries team.
My name is XX and my student number is XX. I graduated on December 2nd. I've returned to Brazil, my home country. Currently, the XX, a governmental body, is validating my certificate. They may send you an email to confirm that I obtained an Msc from the University of XX. I kindly request that you provide them with any information they require, otherwise my certificate won't be validated.

Regards.

XX
 
J

J&K Tutoring

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It all looks good to me except for that last sentence. You shouldn't have to 'convince' them to do their job. I suggest something more like:

I hereby give my permission to release any information or records they request.
 

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The degree is an MSc.
 

Tarheel

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May I ask what kind of certificate it is and why it needs to be validated?
 

Herewego

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Thank you all for your responses.
 
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