[General] decision-making

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Ashiuhto

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Please help me correct the following sentence. Thanks!

When the privileged students who take their advantages for granted grow up, holding the social decision-making power some day in the future, their decision-making and thinking will also get rid of the real world that they don’t understand.
 
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Route21

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Hi Ashiuhto

It would help both us and anyone else reading your text if you could break it down into a series of shorter sentences.

Best regards
R21
 
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