[Grammar] decreases

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Is use of "decreases" in the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not, kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.



This causes better performance in VTB than the CTB. Therefore, the VTB is cleaner than the CTB because the amount of fossil fuels consumption and air pollution decreases in order to produce the electrical energy.
 

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No. Rewrite those sentences in a simpler and more direct manner.
 

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I rewrote those sentences in a simpler and more direct manner.

I have a doubt in the following text. Wells turbine works with using wave energy.In fact, this kind of turbine doesn't use fossil fuels and only using Wells turbine can reduce fossil fuels consumption for generating electrical energy. Now, I want to know that Is the following text correct conceptually?

This means that the energy efficiency of the VTB (Wells turbine with VTBs) is higher than that of the CTB (Wells turbine with CTBs). Therefore, the VTB is cleaner than the CTB because the amount of fossil fuels consumption and air pollution decrease more in order to produce the electrical energy.

VTB=variable thickness blade CTB=constant thickness blade
 

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I rewrote those sentences in a simpler and more direct manner.

However, I'm still not sure about [STRIKE]have a doubt in[/STRIKE] the following text. A Wells turbine [STRIKE]works with using[/STRIKE] uses wave energy. In fact, this kind of turbine doesn't use fossil fuels. [STRIKE]and only using[/STRIKE] Therefore, a Wells turbine can reduce fossil fuel consumption [STRIKE]for generating[/STRIKE] in the generation of electrical energy. Now, I want to know [STRIKE]that Is[/STRIKE] if the following text makes sense. [STRIKE]correct conceptually?[/STRIKE]

This means that the energy efficiency of the VTB (Wells turbine with VTBs) is higher than that of the CTB (Wells turbine with CTBs). Therefore, the VTB is cleaner than the CTB because the amount of fossil fuels consumption and air pollution is much lower. [STRIKE]decrease more in order to produce the electrical energy.[/STRIKE]

VTB=variable thickness blade CTB=constant thickness blade
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