Dissatisfied with improvements and investments in education

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Dissatisfied with improvements and investments in education, the minister has tendered her resignation.
 
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The singular investment would be more typical but it's grammatically OK as written.
 
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I would add something like "the limited" after "with".
 
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