Does the phrase below make sense?

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ovos

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Do you think this phrase make sense:

(...) hopefully he will train your team better than how he speaks!

Thanks for your help.

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Do you think this phrase make sense:

(...) hopefully he will train your team better than how he speaks!

Thanks for your help.

M.

I'm not quite sure I understand.

What do you mean by "how he speaks"?

Is it about a promise made by this person, or is it about his way of speaking?
 
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ovos

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I'm not quite sure I understand.

What do you mean by "how he speaks"?

Is it about a promise made by this person, or is it about his way of speaking?

I am talking about a trainer who speaks English very bad so I wanted to say hopefully he trains English better than how he speaks!

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I am talking about a trainer who speaks English very bad so I wanted to say hopefully he trains English better than how he speaks!

TX

Actually I made a mistake, the whole phrase was "hopefully he will train your team better than how he speaks!"
 

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I would write

Hopefully, his abilities as a trainer are better than his English skills.

Perhaps:

"hopefully he will train your team better than how he speaks!"

Hopefully, he will train your team better than he speaks English.

But I'm inclined to use the sentence above.
 
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