does the sentence sounds good?

[KLPNO]

Hello everyone

I'd like to ask if the following sentence sounds good.

Managers and employees inclined to the fact that “in the work of employees it is important to be guided by interests and expectations of business partners and clients, it is important for them to understand their position, to understand the way they see the situation."

The phrase "it is important for them" refers to employees.
The phrase "the way they see the situation" refers to business partners and clients.

 

[Anglika]

Hello everyone

I'd like to ask if the following sentence sounds good.

Managers and employees inclined to the fact that “in the work of the employees it is important that they are guided by the interests and expectations of business partners and clients, and that it is important for them to understand their position, to understand the way they see the situation." the perceptions of these partners and clients in relation to the employees' roles.

The phrase "it is important for them" refers to employees.
The phrase "the way they see the situation" refers to business partners and clients.

I think that is what is meant.

 

[susiedqq]

How about:

Managers and employees are inclined to believe that for the employee, it is important to be guided by the interests and expectations of the business partners and clients, and it is important for the employee to understand the client's position and the way they see the situation."

 

[KLPNO]

How about:

Managers and employees are inclined to believe that for the employee, it is important to be guided by the interests and expectations of the business partners and clients, and it is important for the employee to understand the client's position and the way they see the situation."

I think this phrasing is one of the closest to the meaning of the original russian phrase..