[Essay] Does this sentence sound natural? 'Wind turbines produce enough noise that can be'

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saloom2

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Hello everyone,

Does this sentence sound natural?

Wind turbines produce enough noise that can be compared to a car travelling at high speed.

Wind is not regular, and at times, unpredictable. What about the comma?
 

Rover_KE

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I'd say

'Wind turbines produce as much noise as a car travelling at high speed.'

'Wind is irregular and mostly unpredictable.'
 

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I'd say

'Wind is irregular and occasionally unpredictable.'

"at times" ≠ "mostly"
 
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