[Vocabulary] Does this sound natural. I hope I shed light on the suggestions I have mentioned.

[saloom2]

Hello everyone,

Does this sentence sound natural?

I hope I shed light on the suggestion I have just mentioned. (to mean I hope I clarified my suggestions very well)


Thanks.

 

[BobK]

No - mention/suggestion is a very odd collocation, and what you hope is that you have shed light (which is itself a bit quaint).

'I hope I've clarified my suggestion' would do it.

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