[General] Does this sound ok? "Walked right up to choose..."

[naweewra]

Hello,

He walked right up to choose the red balloon.
He walked straight up to choose the red balloon.

Do these two sentences sound OK? I want to say that this person walked to the vendor, determined or with his mind made up to choose the red balloon.

Thank you.

Nawee

 

[BobK]

Either 'Walked right up...' or 'Walked straight up...' is OK, but one doesn't 'walk....to choose' something (normally). Perhaps they 'walked right/straight up and chose...'.

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