blizzy
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Please proofread my sentences.
1. Even though it was hard for him to keep his composure, he didn't let on anything.
2. Even though it was hard for him to keep up his composure, he didn't let on anything.
3. He didn't let on anything, even though it was hard for him to keep his composure.
4. He didn't let on anything, even though it was hard for him to keep up his composure.
Perhaps, however, with regard to punctuation, it would be better to put a point between the two sentences.
5. He didn't let on anything. Even though it was hard for him to keep his composure.
6. He didn't let on anything. Even though it was hard for him to keep up his composure.
1. Even though it was hard for him to keep his composure, he didn't let on anything.
2. Even though it was hard for him to keep up his composure, he didn't let on anything.
3. He didn't let on anything, even though it was hard for him to keep his composure.
4. He didn't let on anything, even though it was hard for him to keep up his composure.
Perhaps, however, with regard to punctuation, it would be better to put a point between the two sentences.
5. He didn't let on anything. Even though it was hard for him to keep his composure.
6. He didn't let on anything. Even though it was hard for him to keep up his composure.