Drinking cold drink can increase your sugar level up to an extent that can be harmful

[tufguy]

1) Drinking cold drink can increase your sugar level up to an extent that can be harmful.

2) Drinking cold drink can increase your sugar level up to a limit that can be harmful.

Please check my sentences.

 

[emsr2d2]

You need either "Drinking cold drinks" (plural noun, no article required) or "Drinking a cold drink" (singular noun, article required).

"your sugar level" means nothing. The drink itself has a sugar level or sugar content but a person doesn't. Are you talking about changes to your blood sugar?

 

[Raymott]

"up to an extent that can be harmful."

I'd suggest you delete 'up'. You already have 'increase'. It increases to a certain level.

PS: Drinking cold drinks won't increase "your sugar level" unless the drink has sugar in it.

 

[tufguy]

You need either "Drinking cold drinks" (plural noun, no article required) or "Drinking a cold drink" (singular noun, article required).

"your sugar level" means nothing. The drink itself has a sugar level or sugar content but a person doesn't. Are you talking about changes to your blood sugar?

Yes.

 

[tufguy]

"up to an extent that can be harmful."

I'd suggest you delete 'up'. You already have 'increase'. It increases to a certain level.

PS: Drinking cold drinks won't increase "your sugar level" unless the drink has sugar in it.

Cold drinks do have sugar in them.


1) Drinking a cold drink can increase your sugar level to an extent that can be harmful.

2) Drinking a cold drink can increase your sugar level to a limit that can be harmful.

 

[Raymott]

Cold drinks do have sugar in them.

Nonsense. Some do. Try iced tea. Try cold water.
This is the fallacy of overgeneralisation - it's good to avoid it.