During his stay in Paris for about a year

Bassim

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Is my sentence grammatically correct?

During his stay in Paris for about a year, Peter had an opportunity to meet some of the greatest painters of our time, which according to him, had the crucial importance in his development as an artist.
 

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Is my sentence grammatically correct?

During his stay in Paris for about a year, Peter had an opportunity to meet some of the greatest painters of our time, which according to him, was crucial in his development as an artist.

See above.
 

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I would say, his stay of about a year. He stayed for about a year, but his stay was of about a year.
 
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