Edit please. A 16 years old Wanderer - remainder

[bmo]

Dear Friends,

This is a mini-novel. When Baby Pigtail hated her grandfather, she made a mistake. Certainly she has gone through her share of trials and tribulations, how about you? Have you been through a difficult challenge?

Are you in trouble? Have you made mistakes for which you can’t forgive yourself?

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Thanks for your edit.

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[Tdol]

Certainly she has gone through her share of trials and tribulations, how about you?

Here, I wouldn't use a comma- I'd use a semi-colon.;-)

 

[bmo]

Certainly she has gone through her share of trials and tribulations, how about you?

Here, I wouldn't use a comma- I'd use a semi-colon.;-)

Thanks, tdol, it does look better with a semi.

bmo