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Dear all

In yesterday’s presentation I have noticed that during demo the main user XYZ was accessed on live server.

Please be sure that for demo / testing DO NOT access any user on live database as those users are very critical and can have data integrity issues. We have test servers and test users available with us and can be used for that purpose.

I look forward to your cooperation.

Regard"

Thanks you for your time

 

[Shakespeare's brother]

How about:

Dear all

During yesterday’s presentation I noticed that, during a demo, the main user XYZ was accessed on live server.

For future demos and testing, please make sure that users on a live database are not used since some are very critical and may have data integrity issues.

Test servers and users are available to us and should be used for that purpose.

Thank you for your co-operation.

Regard"