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Emilys resume, welcome to give me advice

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Emily Yang
Room 104 Building 7
Shanghai University, Shanghai 201804
(021)69981020 Email: loki_lx@sohu.com
Dear Sir/Madam,
Your advertisement for a Marketing sales interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
According to the advertisement, I have read your position requires. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Graduate School of Shanghai University this year with a M.S. degree. My studies have included courses in international trade and management and marketing.
During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-6, but also more important I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Here is my resume

Emily Yang

To obtain a challenging position as a marketing sales.
1999.9-2002.6 Graduate School of Linling High School
2002.9-2005.6 Graduate School of Shanghai University

Academic Main Courses
Basic Marketing Macroeconomics International Economic
Global Marketing Microeconomics English Skills
Human Resources International Financial System
Electronics and Computer
International Trade
Computer Abilities

Skilled in use of MS FrontPage, HTML, Winwodes 98, Office 2000.
English Skills
Have a good command of both spoken and written English. Past CET-6.
Language Skills
Have a command of both spoken and written French.
·General business knowledge relating to financial, healthcare
·Have a passion for the Internet, and an abundance of common sense
Sales in Guanyun Company for two month.
Room 104 Building 7 No.20 Chengzhong Road Shanghai University 201804
(021)69981020 loki_lx@sohu.com
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exactly like the kind of job I am seeking

This is a bit messy- wouldn't it be better if you said 'exactly\just the job'?;-)
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