*Not a teacher* I suggest you obtain the use of an English grammar book and a good English
dictionary. There is much to learn and it cannot be all provided to you in this forum. You can improve by studying and practicing with those two reference books. Soothing Dave suggested you start by capitalizing two of the words you used. That advice relates to spelling. He also advised you to not write run-on sentences - which are the result of faulty punctuation. Both of these topics can be found in the two reference books I've mentioned, and each will give you essential information and an opportunity to practice.