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[eddkzk]

Could you please help proofread this text and tell me what you think about it.
I won't resent.

A novelist must share the same thoughts and feelings of the characters in his novels:he must think like them and feel like them while he is writing.This holds true especially in our society because the people on this land have a unique way of life formed through ages and an innate viewpoint on nature,humans and societies.I think that it should be depicted throughout the novel and that it should be conveyed to the reader clearly and in an intelligible way.

Thanks in advance.

 

[Anglika]

Could you please help proofread this text and tell me what you think about it.
I won't resent.

A novelist must share the same thoughts and feelings of the characters in his novels:he must think like them and feel like them while he is writing.This holds true especially in our society because the people of this land have a unique way of life formed through ages and an innate viewpoint on nature,humans and societies.I think that this should be depicted throughout the novel and that it should be conveyed to the reader clearly and in an intelligible way.

Thanks in advance.

It's fine apart from the two minor changes.

Spaces after punctuation!

 

[eddkzk]

It's fine apart from the two minor changes.

Spaces after punctuation!

Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.