[Grammar] event / incident

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Ashiuhto

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Are the following sentences acceptable?

Here are some events/incidents which challenge us to contemplate what kind of generation we are seeking to develop through education after all. These events are as following written.
 

Ashiuhto

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I wrote the sentences as written.

Here are some stories which challenge us to contemplate on our social development. They are as written.
 

bhaisahab

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I wrote the sentences as written.

Here are some stories which challenge us to contemplate on our social development. They are as written.

It's better.
 
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