Every morning Anna commutes

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Every morning Anna commutes about two hours, during which she can snatch some sleep, if she finds a vacant seat.
 

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Every morning, Anna commutes about two hours, during which (time) she can snatch some sleep if she finds a vacant seat on the bus/train.
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teechar,
Thank you for correcting my mistakes.

I am only wondering if the comma after "morning" is mandatory or if it could be omitted. I wanted to use a comma, but then thought that maybe I could omit it, but probably that was wrong.
 

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I am only wondering if the comma after "morning" is mandatory or if it could be omitted. I wanted to use a comma, but then thought that maybe I could omit it, but probably that was wrong.
I'd accept the sentence without the first comma.
 
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