polokoza
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Hello,
I am struggling with the following sentence:
"Mature leaves were collected from the upper half of the birch crown annually (except four terminal)."
In other words, we collected some leaves from a tree, but always left the last four leaves on every twig. Do you get the same information from my sentence? Would it be better to add "leaves" after "terminal"? Is "except" OK, or is there some better word (i.e. "besides", "without", "excluding"...)?
I will greatly appreciate your suggestions, thanks!
I am struggling with the following sentence:
"Mature leaves were collected from the upper half of the birch crown annually (except four terminal)."
In other words, we collected some leaves from a tree, but always left the last four leaves on every twig. Do you get the same information from my sentence? Would it be better to add "leaves" after "terminal"? Is "except" OK, or is there some better word (i.e. "besides", "without", "excluding"...)?
I will greatly appreciate your suggestions, thanks!