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Hello,
does it make sense to use the word "exist" in the following senstence?

To some extent a variation of the use exists; however, the variation is not as high as compared with scaffolding as previously mentioned.

what do you think??

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Hello,
does it make sense to use the word "exist" in the following senstence?

To some extent a variation of the use exists; however, the variation is not as high as compared with scaffolding as previously mentioned.

what do you think??

Thank you,


It is correct to use exist here. But I would change the variation to that variation. But still the second part of your sentence looks strange. Could you rephrase it?
 

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I, too, see no problem with "exist" as you've used it, but I'm very confused by the sentence overall. If you could provide more context I'd be happy to take another look.
 

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Thank you,
i would rephrase the sentense from this.

To some extent a variation of the use exists; however, the variation is not as high as compared with scaffolding as previously mentioned

to:
To some extent a variation of use exists; however, that variation is not much compared with the term "scaffolding" (section 2.1).
 
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