bosun
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 9, 2005
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
Hi! I am trying to write a personnel statement for college admission and if you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your feedback.
1.My mom had to move around many times due to her job, which gave me difficulties as well as opportunites to experience many different surroundings.
2.Moving too many palces was not easy for a young girl, but I made my situation into a benefit by using my adapting ability and friendliess in dealing with people.
1.My mom had to move around many times due to her job, which gave me difficulties as well as opportunites to experience many different surroundings.
2.Moving too many palces was not easy for a young girl, but I made my situation into a benefit by using my adapting ability and friendliess in dealing with people.