feel fearful

[bosun]

Is the following sentence correct?

I won't feel fearful even at night when it rains heavy with a thunder and a lightening if I live with my family.

 

[Shakespeare's brother]

I won't feel fearful even at night when it rains heavy with a thunder and a lightening if I live with my family.

Try: If I live with my family I won't be scared, even on a night of thunder, lightning and heavy rain.