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Is the following sentence correct?

I won't feel fearful even at night when it rains heavy with a thunder and a lightening if I live with my family.
 
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I won't feel fearful even at night when it rains heavy with a thunder and a lightening if I live with my family.

Try: If I live with my family I won't be scared, even on a night of thunder, lightning and heavy rain.
 
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