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There is a factory in the city that makes parts for cars and buses.

I don't see any mistakes.
Maybe we should say of instead of for

 

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There is a factory in the city that makes parts for cars and buses.

I don't see any mistakes.
Maybe we should say of instead of for


Do you know if the error is meant to be one single word, or punctuation, or could it be anything at all?
 

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Do you know if the error is meant to be one single word, or punctuation, or could it be anything at all?

sure,only one single word.
 

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sure,only one single word.

There is a factory in the city that makes parts for cars and buses.


Well, I can't say that I can see one word that could be changed. I can understand how there could be some confusion with the sentence because, the way it's written it looks like the factory is "in the city that makes parts.....". Clearly, it's the factory that makes the parts, not the city, but I can't see a way of changing just one word in order to make that clear.

My only suggested versions would be:

There is a factory that makes parts for cars and buses, in the city.
There is a factory (in the city) that makes parts for cars and buses.
 

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Thanks for you help.
 

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----- I am not an ESL teacher anymore -----

There is a factory in the city that makes parts for cars and buses.

I don't see any mistakes.
Maybe we should say of instead of for


Maybe they want you to change "that" to "which"?

Incidentally, at first I would change "for" to "of", but since the native speakers didn't complain about it I guess it is correct.

Not a native speaker
 

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Would the initial sentence be wrong with "of" instead of "for"?
 

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Would the initial sentence be wrong with "of" instead of "for"?

As far as I'm concerned, we always say that a factory makes parts "for" things, whether it's cars, buses, ovens, computers etc or anything else.
 

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As far as I'm concerned, we always say that a factory makes parts "for" things, whether it's cars, buses, ovens, computers etc or anything else.

Thanks emsr2d2.
So my bet goes on changing "that" to "which" in the original sentence.

(Can I use such expression "my bet goes on..." ? Anything better?)
 
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