first conditional - sentence

sarahburn

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Is it correct sentence?


If button “Login & Buy it by ec-shop” is more visible and emphasizes the benefits of login via it, more users will buy via 'ec-shop'
 

Matthew Wai

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If the 'Login & Buy it at ec-shop' button is more noticeable and emphasizes the benefits of login, more users will buy at 'ec-shop'.
 
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