focus on earning money

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bosun

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Can you help me to express the following sentences more naturally?

While Yahoo has become an entertainmnet website by carrying a lof of adversiting, Google does not focus on making money from advertisement.
 
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sdsu09

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The sentence is pretty clear, why do you need more natural expression of it?
 
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While Yahoo has become an entertainment website from displaying a lot of advertisements, Google has not focused so much on making money from carrying advertisements.
 
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