bosun
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 9, 2005
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- South Korea
Can you help me to express the following sentences more naturally?
While Yahoo has become an entertainmnet website by carrying a lof of adversiting, Google does not focus on making money from advertisement.
While Yahoo has become an entertainmnet website by carrying a lof of adversiting, Google does not focus on making money from advertisement.