[Grammar] Food that is high in protein can help brain to work more efficiently,

sania-baharat

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Are these sentences OK?If not, could you please help me to correct them?

Food that is high in protein can help brain to work more efficiently, and so does regular physical activity.
Food that is high in protein can help brain to work more efficiently, and as regular physical activity does.
 

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The first sentence is correct; the second isn't.
You could write "... efficiently, as does regular physical activity."
 

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Food that is high in protein can help the/your/one's brain to work more efficiently, and so [STRIKE]does[/STRIKE] can regular physical activity.
Food that is high in protein can help the/your/one's brain to work more efficiently, [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] as regular physical activity can.
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