For choosing right vacation destination

[ambitious-girl]

Hello Teachers

"For choosing right vacation destination, we need to know that how far it is. The further the destination is, the more money our trip costs. The another thins is that which season we are planning to go on a trip. For example, in national holiday, such as January, booking flights and hotels will probably cost twice as much money as they cost in normal days of year."



Thanks in advanced.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello teachers​.

"[STRIKE]For[/STRIKE] To [STRIKE]choosing[/STRIKE] choose the right vacation destination, we need to know [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] how far it is. The further away the destination is, the more [STRIKE]money[/STRIKE] our trip costs. [STRIKE]The[/STRIKE] Another thing to consider is [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] which season we are planning to go. [STRIKE]on a trip.[/STRIKE] For example, [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] during national holidays, such as January, [STRIKE]booking[/STRIKE] flights and hotels will probably cost twice as much [STRIKE]money[/STRIKE] as they cost [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at [STRIKE]normal[/STRIKE] other [STRIKE]days[/STRIKE] times of the year."

Thanks in [STRIKE]advanced[/STRIKE] advance.

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please see my corrections above. I don't know of any country in which the whole of January is a national holiday.

 

[ambitious-girl]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please see my corrections above. I don't know of any country in which the whole of January is a national holiday.

Thank you.
Too many mistakes !! I get disappointed

 

[emsr2d2]

Thank you.
I made too many mistakes​! [STRIKE]!![/STRIKE] I [STRIKE]get[/STRIKE] am disappointed. [STRIKE][/STRIKE]

Don't be disappointed. You're here to learn.

Note my other corrections above. Don't put a space before a punctuation mark at the end of a sentence. Don't try to make your own emoticons/smileys - if you really must use one, click on the icon and choose an appropriate one. It doesn't replace a closing punctuation mark.