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OscarVolf

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I have tried to done it best as I can but I realize it still not right. Please someone for verify my or even I can pay for proper translate.

Ask for posibilities to futher development.


Three years have passed since I work for our company.
During this time I had gain expirience in different kind of jobs. From 319 cell when I have started with wrapping and trim, spraying skins,
serious quality verification. 405 Cell - similar jobs. Both Lectra, 538 cell - laminator, 550 when I work till now on foaming, but before I had also did
a skin preparations, and bladder, assebly job.
On my position I very offen do a job wich is not in my duties. I would do even more but very offen I am confined by the acces to appropriate tools,
and my competences are highly reduced. As the one person from all shifts I can operate, prepare, do a toolchange and repair all three press.
With referencesto my education (technical school of motor vehicle engineering) and hobby in this letter I would like to ask for futher training to became, maintenance, tool changer/setter, and for extend my cometence in an appropriate way.
I ask also for letting me know which you would interested in, or organize adequately courses. Eight maonths ago I done Fork lifts courses for
Counterbalance, Rich truck and PPT as I have informed and I have applied also for possible vacant. Unfortunatelly without any answer.
I am a reliable and competent worker, always happy to help. I believe my futher development will be beneficial to both sides.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your sincerely,


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I have tried to [STRIKE]done[/STRIKE] do [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] the best [STRIKE]as[/STRIKE] I can but I realize it is still not right. [STRIKE]Please someone for verify my or even I can pay for proper translate. [/STRIKE] Please correct it for me.

I have written a letter to ask [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] about possibilities [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for further development.


[STRIKE]Three years have passed since[/STRIKE] I have worked for [STRIKE]our[/STRIKE] this company for three years.
During this time, I [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] have gained experience in different [STRIKE]kind of jobs[/STRIKE] roles. [STRIKE]From 319 cell when[/STRIKE] I [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] started in cell 319 with wrapping and trim, spraying skins and [STRIKE]serious[/STRIKE] quality [STRIKE]verification[/STRIKE] control. In cell 405, [STRIKE]Cell[/STRIKE] I did similar jobs.

Both Lectra, (I don't know what the underlined part means) In cell 538, [STRIKE]cell -[/STRIKE] I worked with a laminator, and in 550 [STRIKE]when[/STRIKE] where I still work, [STRIKE]till now[/STRIKE] I work on foaming. [STRIKE]but[/STRIKE] Before that, I [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] also did [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] skin preparations, and bladder, assembly job. (I don't know what the underlined part means.)

[STRIKE]On[/STRIKE] In my current, position I [STRIKE]very[/STRIKE] often [STRIKE]do a job[/STRIKE] undertake tasks which [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are not officially part [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] of my duties. I would do even more, but [STRIKE]very offen[/STRIKE] I am [STRIKE]confined[/STRIKE] prevented from doing so by the lack of access to the appropriate tools. [STRIKE]and my competences are highly reduced.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]As[/STRIKE] I am the [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] only person [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE]on [STRIKE]all[/STRIKE] any [STRIKE]shifts[/STRIKE] shift [STRIKE]I[/STRIKE] who can operate, prepare, (operate and prepare what?) do a tool change and repair all three presses.

With [STRIKE]references[/STRIKE] reference to my education (technical school of motor vehicle engineering) and hobby in this letter I would like to ask for further training to became, maintenance, tool changer/setter, and for extend my cometence in an appropriate way. (This entire paragraph makes no sense.)

I would also like you [STRIKE]ask also for[/STRIKE] to [STRIKE]letting[/STRIKE] let me know which courses you can arrange for me to attend. [STRIKE]you would interested in, or organize adequately courses.[/STRIKE]

Eight [STRIKE]maonths[/STRIKE] months ago, I [STRIKE]done[/STRIKE] completed fork [STRIKE]lifts[/STRIKE] lift courses for Counterbalance, Rich truck and PPT.

[STRIKE]as I have informed and[/STRIKE] I have also applied [STRIKE]also[/STRIKE] for [STRIKE]possible[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]vacant[/STRIKE] vacancies. Unfortunately, I [STRIKE]without any[/STRIKE] have not received an answer.

I am a reliable and competent worker, always happy to help. I believe my further development will be beneficial to both sides.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your sincerely,


If this thread is in the wrong place, please [STRIKE]admin to[/STRIKE] move it. If [STRIKE]Its[/STRIKE] it's not allowed, please delete it.

See my suggested amendments above. However, please note that a lot of it is very confusing. I don't understand the references to "cells", nor do I understand what a lot of your tasks and responsibilities actually were.
I'm sorry to tell you that your English is not really of a high enough standard to write such a letter yet.
 
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