[Grammar] from ourselves

[Ashiuhto]

Is the following wording acceptable?
[FONT=新細明體][/FONT]The third way welooked sleeping problems from ourselves. We used the information which we surfed on the Internet or the messagewhich teachers taught us to prove that information is true or not reallycorrect.
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[Rover_KE]

Sorry — that's very garbled.

Try again.

Rover

 

[5jj]

It sounds to me like a machine translation. The first sentence is incomprehensible.

 

[Ashiuhto]

[FONT=新細明體][/FONT]3. We tested and analyzed our own sleepingproblems. We used the information which wesurfed on the Internet, or the information which teachers taught us, to provethat whether the information was correct or not.
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[Rover_KE]

3. We tested and analyzed our own sleepingproblems.We used the information which wesurfed on the Internet, or the information which teachers taught us, to provethat whether the informationwas correct or not.

Ashiuhto, you will notice that when you copy and paste certain texts, words often get joined together — like 'sleepingproblems' above.

After posting, please get into the habit of checking the text and using the Edit Post button to add spaces where necessary.

Rover

 

[Ashiuhto]

3. We tested and analyzed our own sleeping problems. We used the information which we surfed on the Internet, or the information which teachers taught us, to prove that whether the information was correct or not.