gain and loss

[peter123]

Hi there,

Can you say it like this?

If we don't read more books, we will have loss.
If we read more books, we will have more gain.

Thanks
pete

 

[susiedqq]

If we don't read more books, we will have loss (of what???)


If we read more books, we will have more gain (of what??)


Suggestion:

If we don't read more books, we will lose our ability to grow intelligently.

If we read more books, we will gain more intelligence.