- Apr 12, 2010
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- English Teacher
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I tried to rewrite #1 into #2 and #3 as follows. How can I make them sound natural?
- And my sisters…I think they are the big trouble in my family, they don’t obey anyone's words and they let everyone angry. (Originally written by a junior ESL student.)
- I think my sisters are a big trouble in my family because they are going through their rebellious stage. They are often in a defiant attitude towards elder’s advice and make elders angry.
- I think my disobedient sisters are the troublemakers in my family because they don’t take advice from elders and always get on their nerves.