Gina sat at the table

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.

Gina sat at the table, drinking wine and debating whether she should leave her hometown and find luck somewhere else.

 

[teechar]

Consider "pondering" instead of "debating". What do you mean by "find luck"?

 

[Bassim]

teechar,
I believe I should have written, "and try luck somewhere else."

 

[teechar]

Use "... and try her luck elsewhere."

 

[emsr2d2]

I'd certainly use "try her luck" but I'd leave "somewhere else". Again, it comes down to personal preference.