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YOJ

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Teacher please check the gammar of the following sentences:

Through the temptation of Satan man failed to obey God's commandment and have fallen short of the glory of God.
Repentance is a genuine turning from sin toward God, setting apart from old lifestyle for God's use. Faith is the acceptance of Jesus Christ and commitment of his whole being to Him as Lord and Saviour.
The most important need of the world is the acceptance of God's Law in every matters of men and nations, and the genuine application of His culture and standard.
 
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Teacher please check the grammar of the following sentences:

Through the temptation of Satan, man failed to obey God's commandment and have ["man" is singular - the verb must follow suit] fallen short of the glory of God.
Repentance is a genuine turning from sin toward God, setting apart from old lifestyle for God's use.[setting aside/abandoning your old life to serve God]
Faith is the acceptance of Jesus Christ and commitment of his whole being [of your whole being] to Him as Lord and Saviour.
The most important need of the world is the acceptance of God's Law in every [all] matters of men and nations, and the genuine application of His culture and standard.[God does not have a culture. Neither of these words is suitable. You will need to find another way to say this. ]
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