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The Kiddie Club[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']is still inviting all the [/FONT][FONT='Verdana','sans-serif']Children, ages 7 to 12 years old, to [/FONT]
[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif'] attend Saturday class every Saturday, 9:00 to 10:30 a.m. in their respective areas. [/FONT]
[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif'] We appreciate and give thanks to the parents for their continuous cooperation [/FONT]
[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif'] and consent with this program of JRRR at (address) , near Petron gas [/FONT]
[FONT='Verdana','sans-serif'] station.[/FONT]

 

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The Kiddie Club is still inviting all the Children of ages 7 to 12 years old, to attend Saturday class on every Saturday at 9:00 to 10:30 a.m. in their respective areas. We appreciate and give thanks to the parents for their continued cooperation and consent for this program of JRRR conducted (address) near the Petron gas station.