I don't know what I said that made you think I was making fun of you. Whatever it was, I apologise if that is how you read it. However, I have not made fun of you. I have pointed out that we do not just proofread and fix people's work here. We answer specific questions about specific aspects of the language. In this post, your title simply asked if there were any grammar problems. I answered the question, and I gave you some other information about problems in your post. If you had gone through your post very very carefully again, I think you would have spotted some of them. However, it appears you have simply chosen to delete your original post.