grammer check

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Ankkuurr

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Teacher please tell me is it write to say,
I am your affectionate brother.
Had you been with me it would have been better.
 
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Okay.
I'd put a comma after "me."
 
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Re: grammar check

Ankkuurr said:
Teacher, please tell me is it [STRIKE]write[/STRIKE] right to say,
I am your affectionate brother.
Had you been with me it would have been better.
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Barb D's answer is perfect. Please see the corrections to your post, in red.
 
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Oops. Totally missed that, though!
 
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