Hannah opened her son's Bill

Bassim

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Are my sentences grammatically correct?

Hannah opened her son's Bill bedroom and, seeing the candle burning on the table while he was dozing in bed, shouted, "Put out that candle! I don't want fire in the house."
 

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It's her son Bill's bedroom.
 

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Also, it's not possible to "open a bedroom", no matter who that bedroom belongs to. Try "Hannah opened the door to her son Bill's bedroom ..."
At the end, I'd use "I don't want the house to catch fire".
 

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Your member profile says "Interested in language". When you set up your profile, one of the options for that section would have been "English teacher". You need to edit your profile so that it's clear to all users that you are, in fact, an English teacher.
 
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