I'm not sure about your use of 'today'- it doesn't go with the original sentence, which you say was said yesterday.
I don't get it. So 'today' is wrong? Why? I'm trying to say they called me yesterday and they said I had a game today (today as in the moment I'm geting the call).
1. They called me yesterday and they told me I had to play a game
today and I thought it was in the evening.
Why is this one wrong?
2. 1. They called me yesterday and they told me I
have to play a game
today and I thought it was in the evening.
Is this right?
3. They called me yesterday and they said, "I have to play a game
tommorow", and I thought it was in the evening.
Are my quotations and commas right?
4. 3. They called me yesterday and they said, "I have to play a game
tommorow", and I thought it was in the evening.