He was a man

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Bassim

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Please, would you take a look at these sentences and correct them:

1. He was a man governed by his emotions, making sometimes irrational decisions.
2. It was a doleful view to see all these refugees in their rags lying on the bare ground.
 

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1. He was a man governed by his emotions, sometimes making irrational decisions.

2. It was a pitiful sight to see all those refugees in their rags lying on the bare ground.

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