[General] Help: Ambiguity in the sentence?

wannaknow

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This is the Sentence
Spearheading this transformation, Xyz Group, whose business ingenuity has paved its path into various global industries.

I feel it sends the message that the adroitness has entered various industries rather than the Group which I in fact want to convey.

Correct me if I am wrong.
 

Barb_D

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I'm struggling with this, because it's not a sentence to start with.

If you replace the comma with the word "is" you will have a sentence.

Then it clearly says that it is the business ingenuity of Xyz that has allowed Xyz to enter various industries.
 
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