wannaknow
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- Jul 13, 2010
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Spearheading this transformation, Xyz Group, whose business ingenuity has paved its path into various global industries.
I feel it sends the message that the adroitness has entered various industries rather than the Group which I in fact want to convey.
Correct me if I am wrong.
Spearheading this transformation, Xyz Group, whose business ingenuity has paved its path into various global industries.
I feel it sends the message that the adroitness has entered various industries rather than the Group which I in fact want to convey.
Correct me if I am wrong.