Help!! Help

[Anonymous]

Hello!!
Can you tell me any problem in the following question,

Many children may be very tired after school and will not have enough energy to attend other classes; they can not concentrate on learning and it also cannot arouse children’s interest in learning, especially English, as English is not their mother tongue .


thank

 

[Mister Micawber]

'Many children are very tired after school and will not have enough energy to attend other classes; they will not be able to concentrate on learning, nor can their interest in it be aroused-- especially in English, as it is not their mother tongue.'