Help! I need to correct my short article

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I need help. Please check and correct my short article. Please don't make a new sentences because article must be between 150 and 180 words.


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The Biggest Eastern Festival​

Every year on easter, me and my family regularly visit the one of the biggest Eastern festival in Slovakia. It takes place 30 kilometers from Kosice on east in a village called Dargov.

Festival starts at Holly week. During this week you can buy Eastern meals, food and chocolate in special Eastern shops. I don’t like that you can’t eat this food, becouse it’s „Lent“. A time when is forbidden to eat meat, chocolates and drink alcohol. In this time people usually send Easter cards to their friends and relatives.

Easter Sunday is a day of Jesus Christ resurrection. On this day people go to church for a special Easter worship in the morning. I never go, becouse it’s very boring for me. After the worship every people eat, drink and celebrate this feast day. I like that atmosphere. In every corner of the village you can hear national folklore music.

I always enjoy the time we spend on Eastern Festival in Dargov and I recommend it for anybody who loves traditional values and history.

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Re: Help! I need correct my short article

The Biggest Eastern Festival​

Every year at Easter, my family and I regularly visit the one of the biggest Eastern festival in Slovakia. It takes place 30 kilometers east of Kosice in a village called Dargov.

The Festival starts at Holy Week. During this week you can buy Eastern meals, food and chocolate in special Eastern shops. I don’t like it that I can’t eat this food, because it is "Lent," a time when it is forbidden to eat meat, chocolates, or drink alcohol. At this time people usually send Easter cards to their friends and relatives.

Easter Sunday is a day to celebrate the Ressurection of Jesus Christ On this day people go to church in the morning for a special Easter worship. I never go, because I find it boring. After the worship all the people eat, drink, and celebrate this feast day. I like that atmosphere. In every corner of the village you can hear national folklore music.

I always enjoy the time we spend on Eastern Festival in Dargov and I recommend it for anybody who loves traditional values and history.
 

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Re: Help! I need correct my short article

ok, thank you very much ;-)
 

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Re: Help! I need correct my short article

Say:
one of the biggest Eastern festivals
a time when it is forbidden to eat meat or chocolates, or drink alcohol
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