help in paraphrasing

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Could any teacher help me in paraphrasing the following sentences?

sorry. a mistake in spelling . It should be "edge" (i think it means "positive position" here".)

1/The edge lies in your awareness of how people negotiate the world over.

Also there is another sentence which I would be much appreciate if you could help me in paraphrasing:

2/This year Top Class(a company)invested heavily in a new plant in China and need to expand sales by volumen and revenue to pay for the borrowing costs and to justify the growth in capacity.
 

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Re:
  • The edge lies in your awareness of how people negotiate the world over.
Try:
  • The advantage lies in your awareness of how people negotiate the world over.
Or:
  • Your awareness of how people negotiate the world over gives you an edge.

Re:
  • This year Top Class(a company)invested heavily in a new plant in China and need to expand sales by volumen and revenue to pay for the borrowing costs and to justify the growth in capacity.
Try:
  • This year, Top Class invested heavily in a new plant in China and needs to expand sales volume and increase revenue so it can pay the borrowing costs and justify the increase in capacity.

What do you think?

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