help me correcting the mistakes please.

[jomo27]

Can you please check my letter writing.
Thanks a lot!


Hi Will,

Thanks for replying to my mail. I'm so surprised that you replied very quickly. Glad to see that.

Yeah, I will work very hard and if I could have being one of the performer in the Australian industry, I would be very happy and appreciate.

Allright. I will tell you as soon as semester one has ended. Best luck to you too for this year.


Regards,
Tom

 

[Anglika]

Can you please check my letter writing.
Thanks a lot!


Hi Will,

Thanks for replying to my mail. I'm so surprised that you replied very quickly. Glad to see that. [not the best way to say this. Try "Thanks for replying so quickly to my mail. I am grateful for your speedy response."]

Yeah, I will work very hard and if I could become one of the performers in the Australian industry, I would be very happy and appreciative.

All right. I will tell you as soon as semester one has ended. Best luck to you too for this year.


Regards,
Tom

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[jomo27]

Allright.

Thanks for checking my letter writing.