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Zoe2008

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We are request to conduct the pre-inspection. However, the factory is postpone to start the production due to the power cord shortage . Therefore, I will not arrange the inspection now, and will keep you posted on the status. Appreciate for your follow up.
 

riverkid

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We are request to conduct the pre-inspection. However, the factory is postpone to start the production due to the power cord shortage . Therefore, I will not arrange the inspection now, and will keep you posted on the status. Appreciate for your follow up.

Zoe, this reads like a telegram so it's difficult to know what exactly it is you are trying to say. I'll give it a whirl but I can't promise that I will give an accurate rendition of what you want to say.


We are request to conduct the pre-inspection. [who is to do the 'pre-inxpection'?]

However, the factory is postponing the start of production due to a/the power cord shortage.

Therefore, I will not arrange the inspection now and I will keep you posted on the status. I would appreciate your follow up.
 

susiedqq

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We have been requested to have a pre-inspection. However, the factory has had to postpone production, due to a power cord shortage. Therefore, we can not have the inspection at this time. We will keep you posted on the status of the factory. We appreciate your follow-up.

(I am assuming that an outside source wants to come in to conduct an inspection)
 
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