Help me please

[Zoe2008]

1. Thank you for your clarified, therefore we will keep our record for the latest version and according that in the further order.
2. Because just confirm the part no. from your side today, we would like to postpone the delivery date from wk 13 to wk 14. Could you confirm your acceptance by return.

 

[Anglika]

1. Thank you for your clarified clarification. therefore we will keep our record for the latest version and according that in the further order. We will record the information on the latest version in our records and apply it to future orders.

2. Because just In order to have time to confirm the part no. from your side today, we would like to postpone the delivery date from wk 13 to wk 14. Could you confirm your acceptance of this by return.

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[Zoe2008]

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Hi Anglika,

I would like to rewrite the point 2, could you please review it again and correct me. Thank you

Because we just confirmed the spare part number from you yesterday, therefore it is no enough time for us to prepare them to you and would like to postpone the delivery date from wk 13 to wk 14. Could you confirm your acceptance of this by return?

Regards
Zoe

 

[Anglika]

Hi Anglika,

I would like to rewrite the point 2, could you please review it again and correct me. Thank you

Because we just [only] confirmed the spare part number from [with] you yesterday, therefore it is no [there is not] enough time for us to prepare them to [the items for] you. and We would like to postpone the delivery date from wk 13 to wk 14. Could you confirm your acceptance of this by return?

Regards
Zoe

Is this better?

 

[Zoe2008]

Is this better?

Hi Anglika,

Yes, that's great. Thank you for your correction

Regards
Zoe