help me to correct this sentence

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His lawyer has requested a list of his agents and contact information for these people as well as records from companies that will be able to confirm his prior jobs

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His lawyer has requested for a list of his agents and contact information on these people(?) as well as records from the companies that will be able to confirm his prior job experience.

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His lawyer has requested a list of his agents and contact information for these people as well as records from companies that will be able to confirm his prior jobs

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His lawyer has requested a list of his agents and their contact details, as well as company records, so that his employment history can be verified.

Please note, the previous poster suggested "his lawyer has requested for....." That is incorrect. You do not "request for something", you "request something".
 

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Geez, this is the third thread I've read for the same sentence. :roll:
 
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