[Grammar] Help with proofreading

ditto2016

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Hey guys, I am a proofreader for a CV writing company and need some help please.
I am Afrikaans born and raised and sometimes the English proofreading gets me stuck.
Please help me to make sure this sentence is correct:
His in-depth understanding of his function, as well as his leadership qualities, professional integrity and pleasant personality make him a very valuable team player.
Thank you guys
 

teechar

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Hello ditto2016, and welcome to the forum. :)

His in-depth understanding of his function
That's the only bit I would likely change. What do you mean by "his function"? What does that person do?
 

Tdol

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