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meela

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is it correct or not. please help me.

Mrs. Robert came to our Trust with some medical report of her son in law. He is cardiac patient.

She needed financial help for her son in law's open heart surgery. As you know she is also cardiac patient and her request of financial help in process. Now she is changed her mind not to go under heart surgery and withdrawn her financial request for her operation. She says her son is law is young and he has to do a lot things but she is done all most every things. So decided not to operate but badly needed financial help for her son in law.
 

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is it correct or not? Please help me.

Mrs. Robert came to our Trust with [STRIKE]some[/STRIKE] a medical report [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] about her son-in-law. He is a cardiac patient.

She needs financial help for her son-in-law's open heart surgery. As you know, she is also a cardiac patient and her request [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] for financial help for her own operation[STRIKE]in process[/STRIKE] was being processed. Now she [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] has changed her mind [STRIKE]not to[/STRIKE] about[STRIKE]go under[/STRIKE] undergoing heart surgery and has withdrawn her financial request for her operation. She says her son-in-law is young and [STRIKE]he has to do a lot things[/STRIKE] and has his whole life ahead of him, but that she [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] has done [STRIKE]all most every things[/STRIKE]almost everything she wants to do. So she has decided not to [STRIKE]operate[/STRIKE] have the operation but badly [STRIKE]needed[/STRIKE] needs financial help for her son-in-law.

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